I make sense to things

I’m looking into producing a half hour sitcom called “Watch Children” in which 20 something couples are raising small children. Sometimes they sit around and talk about how cute the children are or what latest adorable outfit was purchased recently, but most of the time they’re doing ridiculous things like trying to lift a couch above their heads or trying to find magnets powerful enough to clip onto each side of their heads and stay in place. I’m thinking it will have a Dawson’s Creek meets Friends kind of feel to it, but the humor will be funny and the mind blowing statements will actually be mind blowing, instead of just involving run on statements of superlingual nature.

If anyone has any suggestions or illusions of room for improvement, please advise:

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